anticipation
exhilaration
adrenaline rush
innocent blush
inhale
eyes veiled
and I shudder
stutter
at my surrender
my captor/my defender
exhale
as you impale
the depth of my trust in you
one small overview
defenses nonexistent
pulse in my clit persistent
my moans increase
begging release
rope
choke
slap
trapped
helpless to what happens next
what others hate, my request
pleasure with no warning sign
pain/ pleasure thinnest of lines
sensation
elevation
low hum
cum
in red welts and bruises I lie there safe
orgasmic and loved I’ve exercised my faith
© Day Dreamer
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whew…let the heavy breathing commence…well done, pulled the reader along with every short line, leaving no choice but to follow.
I really appreciate your kind words Mark! Thank you for taking the time to read it! ❤
I like the orgasmic write, though pain/ pleasure are not my type, not even in blind faith ~ I guess different strokes for different folks ~
I also must say I have a hard time reading the words on grey/black background ~
http://a-sweetlust.blogspot.ca/2012/08/quiet-grief.html
Thank you for taking the time to read. I will attempt to change the background a bit.
Short lines, nice n direct yet set the anticipation .. me lite
Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it!
Sensual write. Not into pain and being sense deprived or dominated myself.. but, each to their own 🙂 Some like it….>> Hot!
Thank you Bren!
Lustful!
Thank you Laurie!
Wow! That is quite a trip. I, too, lay there breathless at the end.
Thank you J 🙂
Yup… hard on the eyes the choice of background and white letters. I have to echo the above… not my thing… but you wrote it well.
Thanks Margaret!
whew…some heat in this one…some nice phrasing too…the placement of my depth of trust in you…what others hate, i ask…interesting…yet to each their own…smiles.
Thank you for stopping by Brian! Your feedback is always appreciated!
Damn that was sexy
Thank you Strategy!